I hate that you all act so smart and serious and important when you're not! ", Lori: (with a broken voice) "What kind of monsters are we?!". [knocks Pep down], [Lynn finishes her run and gets picked up by her family in celebration of her victory. No Such Luck part 2. ", Lincoln: "I know how much you guys like having me there for you, and I didn't want to upset or disappoint you. I only own this fanfiction story, which is rated K+, so enjoy. The Loud House Re-write #1-No Such Luck Add to Favourites By jgodzilla1212 Watch Published: May 10, 2020 75 Favourites 101 Comments 31K Views (It begins right after Lincoln tells Lily why he can't attend to Lily's play date and he bumps into Lisa) Lisa: >scoffing< Pshaw, There's no such thing as bad luck, there's only science, all else is hooey. Was the thought on her mind. Post an update . Lana: What did you expect us to do Lincoln? It's my first ever one shot I've done. We messed up too. (pauses for a second) "You know what, I'll decide when we get there and see what movies are playing. ), (It cuts to the main street. "Uuhhh," Luna started, unsure of how to start the conversation, "Hello, security dude. I wonder if the windows are locked?" You took it too far! I hate how pathetic and chicken you all are! I know you would never label me bad luck, and youd never neglect me. Once they fell asleep, they no longer had any bad dreams that night. 902 8 2. This whole trip their parents were telling them to behave and they got grounded when they didn't, but now they're learning that they did something to cause them to be kicked out of the hotel after only one day. ", Mascot:[in a familiar voice] "Hey, man! Lincoln: "Thanks, Ms. Mulligan. Lisa: (sighs in humiliation) Me neither..falling for some dumb superstition, despite always taking pride in science and not curses!! Lynn Sr.: OUR ONLY SON DESPISES US, WE WERE COMPLETE IDIOTS, WE RUINED HIM AND WE DESERVE IT!!!! Lynn Sr. bit his lip for a moment, rubbed the back of his head with hand, and then sighed, "It might take a while and it might not be easy, but I'm certain we can regain their trust." THAT THING IS AS HIDEOUS AS YOU!" And with that the family walked out of the spa, the kids still angry and upset and the parents ashamed and disappointed in themselves. "Nah, Aunt Ruth," Luna said, "you're gonna wanna listen to this." Two of Lincoln's comics have references on them: The one he reads first has Mr. Lincoln grabs 11 squirrel mascots and put them on his parents and sisters, minus Lily.]. YOU'LL BE HAPPY TO KNOW YOU WON'T HAVE TO WORRY ABOUT DEALING WITH ME OR MY CATS OR MY DISGUSTING PUDDING OR MY BUNIONS ANYMORE! Both Lynn Sr. and Rita responded in a slow, nervous stutter, "Yes." ", Lincoln: (to Leni) "Leni, all those times I went to the Mall with you to pick out clothes, anything bad happen those times? Lincoln: (marches up to Lynn) Straight from you, you big bully! Lisa responded with in her genius talk. Let me tell you this! So about the Duke, Had he ever felt like he was just a glorified peasant in his time around is ten sisters? They were thinking that they should've told their kids no and that they were going to stay at Aunt Ruth's for the weekend. "Why?" And I HATE LEECHES!" "And don't even get us started on the chores she makes us do," Lincoln shouted, "Especially buffing her bunions." Share your thoughts, experiences, and stories behind the art. Lynn: Stop being such a baby and just put that suit back on! Almost as good as any Ace Savvy convention. "SAVE IT, RITA!" (Lincoln picks up the remains of the squirrel suit, blows a spiteful raspberry to the family and runs off in fury and sorrow. It's not me who's the problem, it's you and your stubborn nature. Lynn: Let go of me you crazy, raging brute! How can I help you?" You all are really, really bad luck! And after that, the whole room was silent. You can never come back. (Lincoln throws Lynn into the rest of the family, with a massive, bowling-sounding crash. We don't want to stare at you on the drive home, so you're sitting in the back." "We don't have a hotel room anymore," Lincoln said, in a very angry tone that the parents weren't used to seeing. (tears up.). I already told you, I live here. This Fanfic is a MASSIVE critique on every fanfic that is targeting the Episode "No Such Luck" of the Western Animation Series "The Loud House." No Such Luck Alternate ending (Bad) Deviation Actions. OUR PRECIOUS TROPHIES! At the end of the day, the family's bonds couldn't have been any stronger, they talked more and spent more time bonding, even if it just watching something on the TV. Lincoln and Lucy hung their heads in shame and embarrassment. "Yeah they did," Luan responded with. NOTE: I apologise to those who hate NSL fics, but ive really wanted to get this off my chest. 'What did he mean there's a massive storm heading her way?' Lincoln asked his parents. Suite and Sour / Back in Black. "I know you're headstrong sometimes, but I know that deep down in your heart, you love me. ], Baseball Announcer:[clinging to Pep]"SQUIRRELS WIN! Reacting to The Loud House is an ongoing series of The Loud House and The Casagrandes fics written by J Tom (or JTom09) in which many characters from both shows watch episodes of said shows. ", Lola: (with a sad look on her face) "No. (She storms out of his room and into the hallway. Leni: Linky, dont shout. Lincoln Loud, the middle child of the family, was brought to his older sister's baseball league from his own will. Luck. Except now I have to deal with the most annoying teasing that's ever existed. ", Lincoln: (To his all sisters) "All thoseevents I attended, was I bad luck? But right now, no! Lori: (sighs) Maybe we did go a little too far with these crazy superstitions. Post-Story Notice: Anyway. As Maddie looked at the devastation, she thought back to the parents. Lincoln: You are a stupid bully, a coward, a nobody, a freak, a lamebrain, a beast and the worst sister ever AND THAT'S THAT!!!! Angus: Oh do tell. Actually, there's something I need to do! "Hi, Aunt Ruth," Lola said, in a fake sweet tone, "it's your niece Rita's kids." Eventually, one of them said, "Look officer. We had no idea this family could be so gullible. When they saw the lobby, they knew the bill was going to be expensive. The End. Lisa: *Gasp* It's official! ", (Lynn starts running towards him. ", Lincoln: "Thanks. ), Lynn: (Screams in despair) ROASTED, BEATEN, VERBALLY THRASHED AND TOSSED INTO THE SEA BY MY ONLY BROTHER!!!! Lincoln: You know what!? One of his friends added, "We're not messing with you. ", Lola: "Don't try to fool us! The last one he is shown reading has the Ninja Steel Rangers from Power Rangers Ninja Steel on the cover. Also please don't flame me. Rita: (Gasps) Lincoln! The Loud House No Such Luck Altern. Also, any negative comments or comments suggesting that I'm trying to paint the siblings in a bad light will be deleted and I will block you. Theres nothing lucky about it! ", Lynn Sr.: (with a broken voice) "And we were horrible parents to you, locking you out! "Mr. Security Officer, if I may," his attention went down to that of a four-year old girl with shaggy brown hair, glasses and a green sweatshirt, she pointed to the three other men in the room, and said, "I'd like to point out that these three imbeciles welcomed themselves into our room for no good reason. "Wait, what are you saying?" Knowing they sealed the deal and there's no way they will ever have to go back to Aunt Ruth's, Lincoln said, "Well so long, freakshow. Unfortunately, they were not quick enough and, in a swift moment, the four were launched into the room across the hall, landing in a painful pile on the floor. Bad luck never happened before when he was there..but he said all we do is just mess things up..we really are the worst family ever Rita: We're sorry kids. I hate this stupid beach! Lincoln: I said NO! She told the kids that their parents caused them to get kicked out, she told them what they did and, in a sense, she was responsible for the kids' destructive rampage. Opening the door slightly, Luna stuck her head out and saw a man, somewhere in his early 30's with Caucasian skin and short brown hair, wearing a security uniform. Sighing, Rita turns to her children and said, "Look I know Aunt Ruth isn't your favorite relative" She was interrupted by Lynn Jr. saying, "That's the understatement of the century." Lincoln and the parents come up.]. Completed Lynn: NO! I dont want to support you psychos! Lily was seated in the back with them, she looked up at them with glares and once again said, "Poo poo!" Lincoln: I'd like to keep this in private, but i got a question for you angus. You're supposed to be grounded to the hotel room, remember?" "Aren't you guys going to help us?" "I can't believe we didn't do that sooner," Lola responded back with, "She was nothing but an icky leech. While this Season 2 Loud House episode might not be as bad as 'Brawl in the Family' or 'No Such Luck,' it's up there. Lucy: Well, you covered for me and saved me from all this non-stop torment. Lincoln and Lucy were dealing with a fictional ghost. So consider this as a fourth fanfic of mine. ", Lincoln: (to his parents) "What kind of parents lock their own child out? Lincoln returns the hug, rubbing her back), Lynn: "No, it'sNOT okay! (Shouts) Put the head back on before we get stung by a jellyfish! Felix asked, "Can you tell me what exactly caused these kids to be kicked out?" Immediately, everyone started running or hiding to avoid getting caught in the crosshairs of their destruction. ", Lincoln:[to the viewers] "Maybe I can move into Lisa's fallout shelter. I need to hide! after they let go, Lincoln notices Lynn standing with her head down.) There's a massive storm heading your way." "Get in here, now!," the man yelled, scaring the girl and making her run into the room like her butt was on fire. Find out what other deviants think - about anything at all. We're already hanging on a thread as it is! Said baby had an angry face and she glared at her mom and dad, "Poo poo!" "Yeah Felix," she said, concerned hearing the pain in his voice, "What's wrong?" Lori turned to face him, lowered the window and said, "What?" That answer definitely caused this man's brain to get straight to work. She playfully rolled her eyes. Honest! YOU HATE US!!! Looking up from the soaking wet floor, the man said, in an unamused tone, "No. ", Luna: "No, you were right. I hate the fact that you never take responsibility! The Loud House Encyclopedia is a FANDOM TV Community. (Luna gasps) You all dont quite grasp the concept! EVER!! I cant take a moment more of this! Anyway, here's my fanfiction. Lori: "The bigger question is, how did you get inside? Lincoln is scared, expecting her to beat him up, but instead she wraps her arms around his neck and begins to cry), Lynn: (with a broken voice) "I'm so sorry Lincoln! Lincoln and Lucy were dealing with a fictional ghost. Lola: How could he?! "Listen to what?" I feel like a fool! This triggered events that none of the Loud House family could have seen. *Cries* It's going to take me days to fix this baby! Now, let me make this clear! The important thing is that we learn from them. (Meanwhile, back on the beach, the family has gathered together, feeling very ashamed and humiliated. Two more squirrels collide into each other and miss the catch. ], Lincoln: Mom, Dad? Directors Kyle Marshall (segment Frog Wild) Chris Savino (segment No Such Luck) Writers Chris Savino Instead he found comfort in being hugged by Leni, glaring at her parents as she did so. Upload stories, poems, character descriptions & more. The school bell rings at Royal Woods Middle School. Bad. Just a heads up, this ending is going to feature a lot of yelling from the siblings and behavior/actions that some of you may believe that I'm representing the siblings in a bad light. Lola: Hey, Lincoln! After she did, Leni didn't get angry, but she did get upset, very upset at her parents. What the guy said also got the officer's attention, not just because this guy just informed him of somebody who was working here without being officially employed but also how they were just given the ok to enter a room that was clearly occupied. Perhaps i was wrong to fall for such a deception, even for my age group. it shows how badly Lincoln was treated by his family. "As grateful as I am that I saved you from making a dangerous decision," the man said, his tone getting lighter for a moment before returning to a serious tone, "I'm afraid that doesn't do much to the amount of trouble you're all in.". (The family gets more and more heartbroken as he continues to rant.). Scared as to what will happen if they say something wrong, eventually, Lincoln stepped forward and proceeded to say, "We're really sorry, sir. Lori was trying to figure out a way back into the hotel room. "We just wanna tell you how much we HATE YOU, YOU GROSS UGLY THING!" Right now." Some sisters those ghouls are. He had a glare on his face and he was tapping his foot on the ground repetitively, showing that he was serious. helluvaboss. Ever again. We got your back. Luna put. "And mom should know better," Lori shouted back, glaring at her mother specifically, "Then to take us to that woman!" ", (and that did it. (Tears up) Our only bro. Those honors go to Nickelodeon, Teletoon, Chris Savino, Stephen Hillenberg, John A. Davis, Louis Sachar and Gold Cartoonist (who is located on fanfiction). Felix got up to see the siblings storming downstairs, ready to give their parents a piece of their mind without a care for who or what gets broken in the process. He turned to specifically glare at the parents and added, "And just so you know, you're banned for life now. SQUIRRELS WIN! ), Lincoln: (to the viewers) " I can't believe they actually locked me out the house, which is also my home. He quickly throws the squirrel suit into a rubbish bin.). They knew that whatever they were going to tell Aunt Ruth, it wasn't going to be good. This shocked Rita, she thought Ruth enjoyed seeing her family. Lead walls will keep my bad luck from affecting anyone. Also, just to note, not all of my stories are going to be this gritty or serious or emotional. Luna turned to him with a glare on her face and said, "Forget it, dad! Luna: I dont know. The Loud House: No Such Luck (2 Alternate Endings) View source Ah yes, No Such Luck. Fade to the sisters all waking up from their nightmares. Lana: Gee. You're scaring even me. When the officer entered the room, he was shocked at what he saw. [In stepped David, Winston, Skippy, Silas, Paige, Francisco, Benny, Sam, Chaz, and Bobby. Experimental One Shot. She's smarter than she looks and there's evidence canon in the show to prove it.). Luan: (tearful) We'll never be able to show our faces in public again. Lynn: (sighs) Who am I kidding? Lincoln: (with angry tears) I'm throwing this stupid, disgusting thing away! [Everyone headed to the living room to sleep together. The squirrel mascot is dancing a little less energetic than usual. How convenient for me. I-, Lincoln: "LYNN!" Lisa: I was a fool to fall for it all, I swear. Upload stories, poems, character descriptions & more. The siblings glared at her for a moment but saw she had a point, it didn't make sense to ground her or Lily for that matter, she was a baby, anything she did wasn't entirely her fault. MY TROPHIES!!! The siblings were heard saying numerous phrases but they all pretty had the same topic, 'What did we do to get kicked out already?' Speaking of, I plan to do another alternate ending to another Loud House episode, the ending for it might have been wholesome and good, I just feel that the events that happen in the episode could've been prevented if the siblings did this, that's all I'm going to say. Ruth yelled, "I DON'T WANT YOU OR YOUR UNGRATEFUL BRATS OR YOUR MANCHILD HUSBAND ANYWHERE NEAR MY HOUSE AGAIN? "EXCUSE ME???!!!" Of course, it's not like the parents could them there anyway. One of the Boys alt ending4. "First of all, don't shout at me!," the woman said, in a tone that made Lola be quiet, "Second, if you give me a second, I'll sort this out some more." She started pacing the room, or more specifically around the couch. She knew it didn't mean the weather, it was going to be bright and sunny all day. (Points at Lynn) Nothing, but a stupid sore loser and a nasty, brainless brute! WE WENT TOO FAR!!! I can't believe I just hit one of my own sisters! Ive come to many grave-digging events and cemeteries with you! "Uh, sweetie," her dad said, in a nervous tone, "Think you and Luna can get out of the front seats, so I can drive us home." Nobody ruins my life, casts me out and then uses me, understand!? She walked into the spa and asked, in her usual ditzy tone, "Hey guys? They all shouted. And then blew more raspberries and spit on them some more (hopefully the last author interruption but if not then I'll let you know: I know her seat is located in the first row behind the driver in canon but for this instance of going along with not wanting to look at their parents, the siblings put Lily's seat in the far back to help the other siblings not have to look at their parents, I know this is a little wrong, but please understand it shows how mad the siblings are). I know remaking this episode has been done to death, so this is probably the only alternate ending I'm going to do for this episode. ", Luna: (with a sad look on her face) "No. And with that, Felix fell unconscious, thinking about what kind of damage those kids would do in their anger. Are you saying that our parents are responsible getting us kicked out?" Are you no longer grounded to the room?" I've gotten complaints of loud noises, stuff breaking and a possible brawl breaking out in one hotel room. Everyone in the room went silent, stood still, afraid to make a move or a noise. WE RUINED OUR WHOLE FAMILY!!! ", "Can I just say that I was only out there because I was accidentally locked out." This confused everyone even more, until Lincoln started putting 2 and 2 together. First, she got groans from her children and then Lola said, "What isn't wrong with Aunt Ruth?" After a minute, "Hello," the gruff sound of their Aunt Ruth was heard. N Eddy's big picture show . loud house no such luck alternate ending fanfiction The students of Royal Woods elementary were anxiously awaiting in line to get their yearbooks. Lola: You mean you dont want to support us anymore?
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